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	<title>Comments on: 10 Tips for Improving Your Writing Online</title>
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		<title>By: Glenna</title>
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		<dc:creator>Glenna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 May 2010 01:53:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alex, I think you&#039;ve given a good outline as a starting point.  There&#039;s one thing with which I don&#039;t agree. I think that 100% accuracy should always be one&#039;s goal, whether it be punctuation, spelling, sentence structure… whatever.  I&#039;ve been involved in evaluating resumes, and ANY error sticks in the reader&#039;s mind.  Having someone else proofread is a great idea, as is the admonition about using the passive voice.  Passive voice diminishes the punch of your message.  I enjoyed reading your list, as I&#039;m a print designer, writer, editor and proofreader, and I&#039;m about to embark on trying to sell my skills on the internet.  I&#039;ll look forward to further information. Thanks and cheers!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alex, I think you&#8217;ve given a good outline as a starting point.  There&#8217;s one thing with which I don&#8217;t agree. I think that 100% accuracy should always be one&#8217;s goal, whether it be punctuation, spelling, sentence structure… whatever.  I&#8217;ve been involved in evaluating resumes, and ANY error sticks in the reader&#8217;s mind.  Having someone else proofread is a great idea, as is the admonition about using the passive voice.  Passive voice diminishes the punch of your message.  I enjoyed reading your list, as I&#8217;m a print designer, writer, editor and proofreader, and I&#8217;m about to embark on trying to sell my skills on the internet.  I&#8217;ll look forward to further information. Thanks and cheers!</p>
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		<title>By: Sara</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Apr 2010 13:58:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great article!  Sometimes when I am stuck on grammar, I consult Grammar Girl: a lot of times you can search what you&#039;re having problems with and find the correct usage.

http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great article!  Sometimes when I am stuck on grammar, I consult Grammar Girl: a lot of times you can search what you&#8217;re having problems with and find the correct usage.</p>
<p><a href="http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/" rel="nofollow">http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/</a></p>
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		<title>By: Nick</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nick</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Apr 2010 13:25:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You know it&#039;s weird but a lot of people (I&#039;m guilty of it too) have this notion that the rules you learn in English class don&#039;t apply to writing online. That&#039;s such a strange idea because it&#039;s probably a lot more people that will read what you write online than in an English class. 
Anyway, thanks for the tips. Useful as usual. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know it&#8217;s weird but a lot of people (I&#8217;m guilty of it too) have this notion that the rules you learn in English class don&#8217;t apply to writing online. That&#8217;s such a strange idea because it&#8217;s probably a lot more people that will read what you write online than in an English class.<br />
Anyway, thanks for the tips. Useful as usual. <img src='http://www.redlemonclub.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca Ritchie-Timms</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rebecca Ritchie-Timms</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Feb 2010 23:02:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Interesting point James. 

I can relate to what you are saying. I like to mix up my sentences and voice to give a sense of my personality. 

In regard to the tips that Alex is giving. I am seeing them as suggestions that will sustain an audience. How I execute them is another matter. If I do not understand the fundamentals of the language use I would consult an English teacher.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting point James. </p>
<p>I can relate to what you are saying. I like to mix up my sentences and voice to give a sense of my personality. </p>
<p>In regard to the tips that Alex is giving. I am seeing them as suggestions that will sustain an audience. How I execute them is another matter. If I do not understand the fundamentals of the language use I would consult an English teacher.</p>
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		<title>By: James De Angelis</title>
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		<dc:creator>James De Angelis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Feb 2010 10:50:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alex - The issue is that what you&#039;re teaching are merely executions with no fundamentals to base them off.

It&#039;s like showing someone how to pole vault without explaining how to run, or even walk.

i.e &quot;Use short sentences&quot; - Why? Are you suggesting that there&#039;s never a reason to use a long sentence? It&#039;s rediculous. 

These things are contextual. And to recognise context you&#039;ve got know the basics.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alex &#8211; The issue is that what you&#8217;re teaching are merely executions with no fundamentals to base them off.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s like showing someone how to pole vault without explaining how to run, or even walk.</p>
<p>i.e &#8220;Use short sentences&#8221; &#8211; Why? Are you suggesting that there&#8217;s never a reason to use a long sentence? It&#8217;s rediculous. </p>
<p>These things are contextual. And to recognise context you&#8217;ve got know the basics.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Mathers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Mathers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Feb 2010 14:38:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the comment James, I&#039;m not suggesting this will turn you into Hemingway overnight, but start small, and you&#039;ll get there. Would you like to elaborate on your comment?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the comment James, I&#8217;m not suggesting this will turn you into Hemingway overnight, but start small, and you&#8217;ll get there. Would you like to elaborate on your comment?</p>
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		<title>By: James De Angelis</title>
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		<dc:creator>James De Angelis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 22:29:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A seriously shallow look at writing if I ever saw one.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A seriously shallow look at writing if I ever saw one.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Mathers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Mathers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 22:19:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good to hear it is useful for you Sie, all the best, Alex</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good to hear it is useful for you Sie, all the best, Alex</p>
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		<title>By: sie</title>
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		<dc:creator>sie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 13:11:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am one of the person who get fast in a writers block. therefore your tips are just right for me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am one of the person who get fast in a writers block. therefore your tips are just right for me.</p>
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		<title>By: Maria Parenteau</title>
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		<dc:creator>Maria Parenteau</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Jan 2010 00:52:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You wrote very well about writing. Leading by example. Great article, thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You wrote very well about writing. Leading by example. Great article, thanks.</p>
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